My first story. I hope you send feedback. Please be critical. Be cruel if you must. I can take it. In order to improve, I need to know what you like and don't like, what you love and what you hate.
I have doubts about some stylistic liberties I have taken. Interested to see if you pick up on them and what your reaction is.
And I wonder if I have included too much or too little character development. Let me know what you think.
I would like to cont
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