The first story I submitted to Literotica only drew comments from about 5% of readers; therefore, I am requesting that if you do read this story, please consider leaving a comment, no matter how brief. I only began writing fiction again about six years ago and can use all the constructive criticism I can get.
Thanks, the author
Colby kept shuttling back and forth between the adult pool and the kiddie pool, careful to keep a wat
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